Alright, it is a good concept with good cards, but you need to shorten it down to 40-41.
For starters:
Monsters:
Tour Guide
Dimensional Achemist
Sphere of Chaos
Chaos End Master
Black Salvo (maybe)
Veilers
Rai-Oh
And a few other fillers
Basic Spell/Traps w Allure of Darkness
Traps:
You really only need solemns and mirrors, but you can run BTH or TT if you feel the need.
^^ This is a little late but ^^