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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Loli GFX Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:11 am | |
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Unknown WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:20 am | |
| As for the second image: learn about text placement, shadows, and lighting. | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:08 pm | |
| Well Unknown, There's other....I mean.. I made 4 versions, All of them just has one small difference I made em when you wrote the comment ^ =P - Spoiler:
I love the 2 at the bottom, one of them is green&mud/earth, the other is pink/cute EDIT I got like 2 Splatter brushes and I loved em. Look what I did while testing! - Spoiler:
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Unknown WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:44 am | |
| Check out Kimo's tutorial and you'll learn what I meant: http://www.worldduelingacademy.com/t556-a-kimo-force-photoshop-tutorial-for-dummies
As for the second one: I suppose that's a good background, but the render is way to big. | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Oct 09, 2011 6:39 am | |
| k I'll look, and BTW I don't care about the render, the background is too awesome I can't stop lookin at that picture..I'm not joking... | |
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Unknown WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:49 am | |
| Okay, for someone who had Mew everywhere she sure likes blood... | |
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Ghandour WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Mon Oct 10, 2011 6:06 am | |
| I would disagree with the term "Render too big" because a signature might have only one huge render taking half of the signature, whether its a face or even a shoes. Maybe he wanted to do it that way? However!!! I agree that the render doesnt fit tbh in this signature with its size.
Well.. I see that you did a rather "good" job doing a basic signature. and here basic i mean without "Attraction" without "Effects". My comments: Personally, i dont like a "SQUARE" like signature.. Always prefer the rectangular ones, with a wide width, but a small height. I always do 420x150. Personally i find it the idol dimensions for a sig. Gives you enough height to show the most important part of the render while giving you space to write.
BACKGROUND! In the first sig, bad color. Do not fit at all. Second, i dont like the bg. Empty and it just appears that you used some simple brushes.. My general advices. EITHER MAKE A BLANK BACKGROUND (blank means with one color -Mostly black or any color that fits- then you add effects to it) OR DO NOT make a bg. Personally, i would advice you to use "STOCK BACKGROUNDS"
Font: doesnt fit, text too small compared to the sig. Not catchy
Colors, do not connect tbh
Do not use "STROKE" or "OUTER/INNER" glow unless you know what you are doing! Stroke doesnt match here tbh, + its too wide.. Its like 6 px stroke?
Those are my comments ^^ hope they help | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Mon Oct 10, 2011 6:30 am | |
| Yeah, I tottally agree with you it really helps, BTW I hate squares too, but it was my first and I had to get an idea about GFX, Am I right? | |
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Unknown WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Mon Oct 10, 2011 1:12 pm | |
| - Ghandour wrote:
- Maybe he wanted to do it that way?
I believe it's a she unless she's changed her gender in the past couple of days.. | |
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Ghandour WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Tue Oct 11, 2011 7:35 am | |
| SERIOUSLY? lol! You pass all the stuffni wrote just to comment on "he" or "she"? Seriously? Cmon dude -.-" I didn't concentrate about it -.-" | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:42 pm | |
| TIME TO EXPLODE!!- Spoiler:
Oh and I'd like you to spam tutorials in my message box. please and thank you~ | |
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IronicTrout WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:55 pm | |
| They are pretty good, but they lack in flow and depth of field. | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:53 pm | |
| Flows aren't a MUST in signatures..are they? :/ | |
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Bakura Normal Fangless Vampire
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:16 pm | |
| Actually flow is a must =P
your getting better just try work a little more on your flow and then we may be able to step you up to a more complex part of gfx =D | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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IronicTrout WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:56 am | |
| It still feels lacking in the flow department. Also follow the rule of thirds for text. | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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Bakura Normal Fangless Vampire
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:09 am | |
| what you need for text is something small but noticable + it blends in
take IronicTrouts sig for example see his text it it "big black" does it blend? yes, is it small but noticable? yes (sorry for using ur work trout but i needed a quick example =P)
btw your flow is getting better but what you really want to do is not just use the motion blur filter. try to use thigns like smudge tool, brushes, get me?
it seems ur getting quite better gradually so why dont u try a littl bit of c4d work to help the flow?
anyway good inprovment nour =] | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:14 am | |
| "anyway good improvment nour" Thanks :D So, Here's what I got : Try the fonts that you have and try to see if blending options work on them. and with the Flow I should try to tweak too with the smudge/dodge/blur section :3 Atleast that's what I think you said. :P Thanks guys, your awesome. If I had a cookie for everytime--I'll just make a topic about the cookie thing later.. | |
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Destined777 Mirage Knight
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 7:57 am | |
| nice For your latest signature I like it because its different. I don't have too much to say but to try different things out like C4D's some brushes you know experiment but your are definitely getting better keep it up :D | |
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Lupe WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:28 am | |
| Its great progress your doing here nour, keep it up. But one thing is pissing me off about the signatures.
Sig 1 - ITS MARI NOT VENNY and she aint no magician she uses a book that summons machinery as weapons on her side.
Sig 2 - You make sieghart look bad, no scratch that, he doesn't even look like sieghart, but its a good sig
Sig 3 - Arme is a Battle Mage, not a powerful girl. She is most likely the ignorant one from the Grand Chase. And she practically uses religion-banned sorcery.
All Sigs - First of all these renders cannot be used for flow. Except for Sig 3, you tried your best on the flow using action blurs, that one shows a bit of flow, right now I will tell you a pro tip right down, read it and follow it.
Thats just the text/info, the sigs are cool. Dont be angry or sad because I was just being mean, pro tip: If you're gonna make a sig be sure to know what your making, if you don't know anything then dont place text or ask me, all of these characters are from GC and I know every single history of every GC character.
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IronicTrout WDA Member
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 9:29 am | |
| Flow is definitely better in the latest sig. But I'd grab the blur tool and set it down to low strength and blur like everything besides her arm in the foreground. | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Loli GFX Sun Nov 06, 2011 6:05 pm | |
| Destined777 - Thanks. But I don't know how to use C4Ds. the only way I use em is to put them on low opacity in the background o.o" and I can't view videos atm coz of Stupid Internet. Pyro - Sorry I make them look bad.. I can edit them, seeing as how it really ticks you off, and Also your not being mean or rude, It's just advice (or criticism) Sorta like Bakura. Next time I either look em up or no text >.< I only use these renders from grand chase because I'm not good at finding renders as good as them. IronicTrout - I'll keep that in mind :D | |
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