Loli GFX

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My stuffz :3

i dont think ther renders flow helps because of her hair, also hte render does go with the background well, it doesnt blend in for me( i dont mean the colours i mean it does like like its in the background, looks more ONtop of it)

It doesn't look like you blurred the background or sharpened the render. Work on depth.

99nour wrote:

+1 Like?

I adore this <3

Some crazy-ass prevented me from sending pms. So add me on msn if you want me to critique anything morgan[dot]s[dot]scott[a]hotmail[dot]com

Then again there are issues eco brought up in the past with that so WDA takes no responsibility in the case you choose to follow that advice.

I'll be short and simple

1: I don't like it, looks to messy and the text doesn't go.

2:its ok but It could look alot cleaner to make it better

3:hmmm where have I seen this before, oh yea, you tryed to copy Scott didn't u .-., that's his style. Well, the brush work isn't the best , never put pure White very shiny brushes Ontop of render, I don't believe the yellow lighting spots are needed. The text draws attention, make it simple.

4:I don't get what your going fr in this one, it looks random , what's with all the black lines? The brush work still could use some work. The text . Did you forget the rules of placement? Rule of thirds, close to render . And don't make it draw attention,



My overall rating 7.5/10

I am actually disappointed in you nour

Better , it looks clean now and te text doesn't take focus as much

I think you are well past the point where you need to define your own style. Although it is a great way to learn by emulating other artists (Many art universities do this) that is more for practice for yourself than for final work. I think you should really try and play around with everything you know how to do and come up with something so when someone sees one of your sigs they automatically know "this must be one of nour's", but that is my 2 cents. I am not trying to be mean or condescending so forgive me if this is how this post sounds...

Try a stock?

Sig 1: {What's with all these sigs with these big eyed girls staring at me :O RUUUN :P} anyway since the render doesn't give any flow I guess you would have to make your own .-. you ask what should I add but its basically the same render in your current sig lolz so if you like how your current sig looks that's what you can base it off of I guess lol.

Moons: uhm ok?

Sig 2: its not bad its just plain but sometimes a nice plain signature isn't gonna kill anyone lol. In other news the lighting needs work, And the render seems a little low quality.

nour its good but ive seen better