Poem/ It kills to have no talent

Subject: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:13 am

It kills to have no Talent

I'm just a Jain Doe, nothin' to see
I just don't know the talent in me

I tried Soccer, it didn't go ace
The ball just hit some guy in the face

So I tried teaching, it wasn't meant to be
I couldn't even teach what's two plus three

Smart? How come?
Everyone knows I'm pretty dumb

I can't pull a prank, I always make a sound
And my whoopee cushions are always found

Instruments are bad, atleast when they're with me
The last time I tried everyone jumped into the sea

Artist? Poet? Genius? Dentist?
So many things I even made a list

I don't know, this makes me pissed
There's not a single thing that I missed

Maybe I just don't, have any talents
I also don't have any achievements

And now I give up, I really do
But I wish you good luck finding your talents too

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:22 am

I don't think talents rhyme with achievements ... they sound totally different .

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:47 am

1 poems do not have to rhyme
2 there is more than one way to rhyme, another way is to have ending letters corresponding to the other.

3 thats a very nice poem , good job

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:21 am

omgz I love it.

just kidding what the fuck is this

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:40 pm

rjuto wrote:: omgz I love it.

just kidding what the fuck is this

OMG Rjuto said he hates it. I'm sooooooo surprised. /Sarcasam

bakura normal wrote:: 1 poems do not have to rhyme
2 there is more than one way to rhyme, another way is to have ending letters corresponding to the other.

3 thats a very nice poem , good job

Thnx

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Wed Mar 28, 2012 11:45 pm

rjuto wrote:: omgz I love it.

just kidding what the fuck is this

lmao hahahahahahaaha

btw I know what talent you have...and its not writing!

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:24 am

But i like to see different rhyme other than using "me" all the time and in each poem.

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:18 am

Bloo wrote:: But i like to see different rhyme other than using "me" all the time and in each poem.

And we would like you to shut up.
Anyways nour, I guess you're dead...rip

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Thu Mar 29, 2012 8:24 pm

rjuto wrote:: And we would like you to shut up.
Anyways nour, I guess you're dead...rip

Ewwww ...... ummm nour after Re-Thinking i think
the poem was good (not like some people ...)

what do you mean by "we" your not even a half person.

Subject: Re: Poem/ It kills to have no talent Fri Mar 30, 2012 9:26 am

99nour wrote:: Maybe I just don't, have any talents
I also don't have any achievements

....noob lol once u get level 12 worth of trophies, 9045g of achievments, and liek... well can't list steam i'm not the kind of person to jump in to pc achievments...

rjuto wrote:

Bloo wrote:: But i like to see different rhyme other than using "me" all the time and in each poem.

And we would like you to shut up.
Anyways nour, I guess you're dead...rip

For once I agree with the mad person, meh. Rot and die alone. the both of you.

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