Crystal Beast deck!

Monsters:18
2x Hamon, Lord of Striking Thunder
3x Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus
3x Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth
3x Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger
2x Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle
1x Crystal Beast Cobalt Eagle
2x Dragon Queen of Tragic Endings
2x Summoner Monk

Spells:17
3x Crystal Release
3x Crystal Abundance
2x Crystal Blessing
2x Rare Value
3x Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins
2x Crystal Beacon
1x Dark Hole
1x Monster Reborn

Traps:5
3x Crystal Raigeki
2x Torrential Tribute

Okay well first off I would like to state I didn't make this deck I bought from someone on another academy site. Thought it was the top pricing I bought it for, it tends to be too slow for most of these new decks out. So I would suggestions for changing it, I would also like to know if I should change it to a Rainbow Dragon deck instead, if so make changes for that if you would like too. I just would like to really speed up the deck and be able to stand somewhat of a chance against all these new decks out there.

You paid someone to make a deck and they put hamon in your crystal beast deck?
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Isn't that a scam?

Anyways, the reason it doesnt work should be obvious, half your deck requires pre-existing conditions to work, so during the first turns you'll just get beaten down and the opponent will be doing as he pleases. Try loosing cards you don't need in favour of generally useful ones.

And no, no Rainbow Dragon.

Well actually I asked for it to be the lead card. So that completely my idiotic mistake. I kinda didn't understand what your trying to say.

-3 hamon
-1 cobalt
-2 or 3 abundance
-3 crystal raigeki
+2 terraforming
+2 mst
+1 crystal becon
+1 avarice
+3 horn of the phantom beast
and make an extra deck full of rank 4 xyz and 2-3 rank 3 xyz
u can also try cards like crystal promise and crystal tree

i don't like abundance
personal isssues