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alice_k
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|  Subject: my works Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:59 pm | |
| here it is tell me what ya think and give advice  | |
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Destined777
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| | Subject: Re: my works Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:06 pm | |
| well in my opinion I really like it no mater what people say xD
na but it is good work but -
the right side that thing gets cut off maybe erase it with 0 hardness eraser.
maybe also wok on depth like make the girl sharper and the background a little blured {not by much though}
but mostly it is good work :D | |
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Red
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| | Subject: Re: my works Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:08 pm | |
| O_O
Awesome. I'm gonna stare at her for a while.
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Nour Force
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| | Subject: Re: my works Thu Nov 24, 2011 5:13 pm | |
| Holy trout--I mean Holy Mackerel! | |
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Unknown
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| | Subject: Re: my works Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:35 am | |
| That's really good alice. I recommend adding some borders. | |
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Legendaryfrost
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| | Subject: Re: my works Fri Nov 25, 2011 3:23 am | |
| Nice work, just work on depth like it was mentioned above and also the C4D, try to make it so that the edges aren't seen in the sig, other than that it's fine. Also how were u able to get the bg to look like that? | |
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alice_k
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:16 am | |
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IronicTrout
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:35 am | |
| - alice_k wrote:
- what do you mean?
I'm assuming you are confused about the depth thing. Well to put it simply, notice how nothing seems "out of focus" on your sig. Because of that the eye perceives everything to be on the same layer of "depth". To add some I would suggest slightly blurring aspects of the sig that you don't want to be in focus, or you can take the burn to the parts (I usually do both). But most of it is up to your personal preference. Good sig nonetheless, and keep up the great work. | |
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alice_k
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Nour Force
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:24 am | |
| Wow those look great. I won't judge but y'know, if you try to submit 2 of those sigs we can get you in the MoC!! | |
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Minako
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Bakura Normal
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:05 am | |
| getting better each time alice  | |
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Unknown
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:10 am | |
| - alice_k wrote:
 This tag has a lot of pretty bare space. Maybe try cropping it out? | |
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Kimo Force
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:28 am | |
| I'll give you the points that you might want to focus on.
- Lighting and shadows
- Depth
- Flow (Just a little bit)
- Color scheme (try staying away from Monochromatic themes)
- Text (Needs improvement in terms of placement)
Personally, I think you're doing pretty sweet. From what I see, you're a pretty talented artist, but your skills could use some slight tweaking. Keep up the good work. If you need anything else on how to improve and whatnot, let me know via a PM. | |
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alice_k
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sun Dec 25, 2011 12:07 pm | |
| @99nour thanks but i already applied must have been rejected D: @minako thanks that means a lot @bak i try :D @ok thanks @kimo here is a new one - lighting, shdows and flow i try to make the way the light is shining the flow -depth i tried hard to make catastor pop out -color scheme still mono sorry -text its just really hard for me i did not add it to this one NEW tell me what you think  | |
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Nour Force
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| | Subject: Re: my works Sun Dec 25, 2011 4:28 pm | |
| Actually alice, Kimo forgot to tell you rejected or accepted, now me and bakura run the marytyrs of creation so I saw your application un-answered. I thought you quit so I just left it there, alice you do some really great work. But the thing is you needed to put TWO pieces of work to apply. Silly Alice! ^^
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And yeah, I'm still not judging that sig. I'm barely good at making signatures myself haha! | |
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alice_k
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| | Subject: Re: my works Mon Dec 26, 2011 3:55 am | |
| NEW tell me what you think  | |
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