Poem War Game

First topic message reminder :

The Poem War game
It's a simple game where you reply to the above poster by saying a small poem, it could be any size as long as it's 2 or more lines!
Take this conversation for example

Spoiler:

Wow now, where did all this hate come from?
Dissin' my hard work, man, that was dumb.

You have no idea how hard I worked on my book.
How long my ideas brew and cook.

My work is from the heart.
It was my way for a fresh start.

You can't comprehend what my story is about.
What, you thought I was just some burn out?

My book is my passion, my everything, my life.
I would even consider my book to be my wife.

Many wonder why would I feel that way.
Because that's my passion and it will stay.

My book is the one thing I got.
I know it won't make me a big shot.

Don't you see?
This is me.

The Seattle Massacre is my creation, my baby.
Diss it again, I'll kill ya crybaby.

And Nour, don't hate me for being better than you.
We all know that it's true.

Don't be hatin' me because I can rhyme better than you can.
You can't deny my skill, so admit I am the best man.

I am an arrogant ass, I know that I am.
But really, I just don't give a damn.

You either love me or hate me.
Draw that line and leave me be.

Get it through your head, you just can't compete.
Must I say it again? I just can't be beat.

Man, what is this crap you think you're all pro
None of you get paid to do this so shut up and go

This was supposed to be a game about a rhyme and a poem,
but all of you talk shit telling each other to go home.

This game involves thinking but most of you are lacking
so shut up, sit back and just stop your quacking.

Stop all this hating and just play nice
before this game gets locked up in ice.

Stop acting like a boss or go get out.
All this hate makes me wana shout.

This is supposed to be a game of poets.
You all turned it into a battle and you know it.

This isnt a rap contest where we diss each other.
So go play nice or ill make you run for cover.

As you know i like to play nice.
But if you want me to, ill be as cold as ice.

Im not the guy to go get pissed over nothing.
Tough i swear i can show you all something.

On the internet i try not to be a prick.
Because pepole like that make me sick.
Like you now bloo, your acting like a badass.
You know what man your just a big fat lameass.

Now i think guys its time to stop fighting.
Or we will set ablaze the fire where lighting.

This is bako giving some advice.
Its not exactly gonna make paradise.

You know maybe it could make some good
If we all stop and take down our hoods.
To show our real face, and to stop trying to impress.
Maybe then , we may fight less.

nour, i'm glad you changed the subject
reading all the posts really gave the effect
that you don't like it when others show disrespect
to each other so it feels like child neglect
so i'm trying to figure out with all due respect
why most of the peoples rhymes end in a wreck
but i know my ryhmes are past perfect
so i'll make really this clear and direct

that j.j. knows how to ryhme
it's his occupation
so everyone better stop talking bout him like that
before he put's your ryhme's in devastation

p.s-that's all i got. this was a good idea nour

Now there's things I aught to teach ya,
in terms of grammar and rhyme,
now first thing's first; let's get a pen
You'll be a pro in less-than no-time

Low-time rhyming all the time's my thing
So damn sweet girls try to give me wedding rings
But a swing and a miss boy is what you just did
But listen well and you can learn some good things

Well a basic is you gotta put rhythm to your words,
if you don't do that, well, you're gonna get served,
So you just sing it in your head and see if it works
Then your lyrics will spread and you're gonna get heard

Now secondly importantly your grammar is ghostly
I don't see how anybody's grammar can't be toasty
Mostly you gotta put some places to apostrophes
before every S ain't working for the words, see

Apostrophes stand for shortened and possessive
Easy go in rhymes 'cause they're so damn repetitive
The tricky bit of rapping is takin' the initiative
Using easy poetry will just make everyone depressive

is this topic still active?
Its more dead then alive :( (doesnt rhyme but thats fine)
People need to start rappin
Instead of watchin vids and f-ppin
And guys please dont ban
Im just trying the best i can
If you dont like the post
I'll edit it for the most

Failed~

(if you guys know the different kinds of poetry, you know that it doesn't really have to rhyme, I can make a pro poem without rhyming so don't try so hard to make it rhyme just make it go with the beatz!)

This place is made like a mace.

Right now I can't sit in my place.

You guys fight like your 9-years old. (no offence)

Wait a sec to remember this is really bold.

This game was made to compete others' shit.

Right now I don't need a hit. (book,poem,w/e that can be popular and good ex; kro's book)

If you realized the game was made for war.

Change the topic if you don't want it a battlefield.

Yes I suck, but I have my ups n' downs.

Kro the problem is that you brag and make us frown.

But isn't war made to turn it upside down?

Now my shitty rhyme is lost.

Guess my message's end is here.

(My message is that Poems should be a message, inspiring, creative, it doesn't have to rhyme, depends on what type of poetry your going for, you can use both types or one or neither. But nour you called it Poem ''War'' Game to showoff your battle skills for the readers' field. It should be Poetry/Poem Game.)

First off Pyro; that's no fun,
I mean sure, rhyming poetry ain't the only one,
but hell; people find things interesting
if they can speak, or rap, or sing

Now Bloo; we've talked about this,
say your words aloud and see if they work,
your first line doesn't work, swing and a miss,
But hold on right there, we'll make somethin' from this

Well ya see, scar doesn't rhyme with war
You say war like you would say door
Scar you say like you would say far
Now, let's change your "scar" to a good old "whore",

Now yay, everybody's got pay
Every poem they make's gonna get them laid,
Now this is where the money's made so
Start checking what you write; you'll go up a grade

Fish, I know I have a hard time with Rythem
I don't even know if I spelled the word right
But who cares, this really isn't a war
Or so you think; I think that this ryhme is gonna be pretty tight

Now If you haven't seen it yet i'm using a ryhme scheme
It's like how a story set's a mood and has a theme
So far it goes A,B,C,B and then A,A
But if you don't want to read anymore you can go write an essay

On why this topic is for fun
Not for war
I think that Nour meant it
but she can't spell anymore

No offence Nour
And excuse me for mistakes
If we had to be on teams
We'd send Fish right through the gates

Now I Think we should just ryhme for fun
And by the time my rap end's
The day is gonna be done

So why don't you all sit back
And watch in galore
When you see my next rhyme
Is the French and Indian War

(Teams wouldn't be that bad idea. lol. Don't take that into consideration Nour. Rock ON!!!)

Darklight's the name
and i'd love to join this poetry game.

I know i'm new
so some of ya probably don't have a clue

i'm pretty good when it comes to makin a rhyme
and i usually succeed time after time

i've noticed many mistakes
especially in the poems bloo makes

i'm not tryin to diss
i just don't really like the constant rhymin miss

so please to make this poem come to it's ends
I just hope we can all just be friends

My name is
Michael Wynchester
Eatos-Release master
Few are better
Don't hate this letter...

Q
No one uses it much anymore
I think it's sad and I bet so does Nour
Why don't you try to use Q for
In a line of your poem lines in this war?

(Really, I would continue but i have to go...)

i am reviving this thread
for so long it has been dead
datch could have done it but he's a metal head
now i'm off to eat some bread

boats are lame
this is a game
so gth kimo
cuz i am an emo

Not just emo, kinda stupid,
Running 'round, praying that cupid
Will bless you in pursuit of that old,
Ancient, forever-eternal quest from
Blissful, grey, neutral, infernal,
A white-knight dream to score amoré or fraternal,
Be that tournament or a little smile,
From a girl nearby the River Nile.

Fish wrote:

Not just emo, kinda stupid,
Running 'round, praying that cupid
Will bless you in pursuit of that old,
Ancient, forever-eternal quest from
Blissful, grey, neutral, infernal,
A white-knight dream to score amoré or fraternal,
Be that tournament or a little smile,
From a girl nearby the River Nile.

FISH!!!keep this up and i'm gonna eat ya
and to the ground i'm gonna beat ya
i'll fuck u up and make u my whore
so stop saying that i love nour
unless u want me to hit u more