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PostSubject: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 4:45 am

Why do I love you?

Why do you torment me so?



Every second lost feels like an eternity,

when I am not beside you.



I get jealous when other boys look at you,

I get sad when you look at other boys.



I want your affection,

I want your attention.



I want you in my arms,

I want you for myself.



But I cannot,

it is a one sided battle.



A losing battle against a force so strong,

there is no hope for victory.



But alas, I am a fool,

A fool fighting a losing war.



I fight hard for an unattainable prize,

I fight hard for her attention and affection.



A chance as the prize,

a chance worth more than gold.



Others advised against my foolish fight,

many told me to lay down my weapon.



But as a fool, I continue to fight,

I continue to fight this losing battle.



Why, I ask myself,

Why do I fight this losing battle?



That's simple.

It's because I love you.
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 5:48 am

You will win any girl with that imo.
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 6:03 am

psychoturtle wrote:
You will win any girl with that imo.
Yes he will Psycho,the ladies will be crying all over you with that poem :D
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 6:39 am

that poem is awesome but were i come from you have to do alot more than poems to get girls from were i live
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 8:28 am

I've never found poems to be that good a line until you actually have the girl. In this day and age it's a bit weird, reciting poetry to girls in bars and stuff. xD

It's a good poem though, I think you could make your significant other very happy like that.
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 4:23 pm

If I can get a significant other. I can never find one that would actually date me for me and not cheat on me or leave me for someone else.
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 4:37 pm

I know i have that same problem J.J. but it can't be helped that we're the only ones who can control ourselves but it it's true the you'll find your significant other just requires the time is all. I have faith in you and i'm sure someone else too on WDA has faith in you. Now it's your job to hope and not doubt!

~Ragingdarkness giving his life advice
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySat Jun 25, 2011 5:44 pm

You'll never know if she's that type until she shows you.
IMO, thinking a girl is going to cheat isn't a good reason not to date her, because for all you know, she might love you and never cheat on you and be obsessed with you for the rest of her life. o:

Y'know, sitting in her basement twirling a lock of your hair on a piece of string around her neck while listening to 'Mad World' on a loop.
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PostSubject: Re: Why Do I Love You?   Why Do I Love You? EmptySun Jun 26, 2011 6:17 am

oh boy,this revived some,long forgotten memories,but nevertheless,a good poem,and i agree with the rest of the people here,try again and again,you'll eventually find your soulmate,never give up bro
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