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| Subject: Three Sword Style - Pink Mist Sat Feb 23, 2013 12:08 pm | |
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Nour Force Magical Girl
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| Subject: Re: Three Sword Style - Pink Mist Sun Feb 24, 2013 3:44 pm | |
| You know, it's pretty nice but I can still see some flaws. See, the light source at the top right looks strange. I'm going to assume you added a nebula. Over there, it looks... I don't know, foggy? I know you were going for a mist but it throws the signature off guard. It's more of a mist than a light source. The text should be closer/bigger to the render since it's kinda hard to spot. Maybe, just maybe, you could have also added some additional c4ds to the render in addition to sharpening it. Overall: 7/10 Don't get me wrong though, the reason I posted late was because I hesitated in posting; I wouldn't trust my own CnC. =x | |
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DigiDigi WDA Staff
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| Subject: Re: Three Sword Style - Pink Mist Sun Feb 24, 2013 4:04 pm | |
| - Nour Force wrote:
- You know, it's pretty nice but I can still see some flaws.
See, the light source at the top right looks strange. I'm going to assume you added a nebula. Over there, it looks... I don't know, foggy? I know you were going for a mist but it throws the signature off guard. It's more of a mist than a light source. The text should be closer/bigger to the render since it's kinda hard to spot. Maybe, just maybe, you could have also added some additional c4ds to the render in addition to sharpening it. Overall: 7/10 Don't get me wrong though, the reason I posted late was because I hesitated in posting; I wouldn't trust my own CnC. =x On top of that, perhaps you can use lighter shades of purple on your name (and perhaps lower the size of "[PK]" so that its not as large as you actual name.) | |
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