The Rising Prodigy (Chapter 10)

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The Rising Prodigy

Rated: PG
Author: Ryan
Genre: Fiction

Special thanks too:
Chrono (TWA)
Kaizen (DK)
Kyosuke Kiryu (DK)
Hyorinmaru (DK)
Maximillion Pegasus (TWA)
Kimo Force (WDA)
Zeriix (TDA)
MasterGouken (TDA/CDA)
Seto Kaiba (BC)
Friends & Family
Yu-Gi-Oh Card Maker
Konami
The Maker of Computers
The Maker of Microsoft Word


Key:
(example) = character's thought
*example* = character's action
example = narration
(example) = character's feeling/emotion


Main Protagonists:


Name: Ryan Karino
Age: 17
Deck: Rising
Spirit Partner: Raziel, Rising Dawn

Name: Sarah Bouchard
Age: 17
Deck: Fairy/Counter-Fairy
Spirit Partner: Honest

Name: Whyet
Age: Unknown
Deck: Lightsworn

Name: Trey Boulay
Age: 17
Deck: Special Crystal
Spirit Partner: Crystal Carbuncle - Erasmos


Main Antagonists:

Name: Dark Master Kokuraia
Age: Unknown
Deck: Dark Minion

Name: Dark Minion Kalkuno
Age: Unknown
Deck: Darklord Deck


Other Characters:

Zach
Kenny
Grandpa (Ryan's Grandfather)
Cicera
Cop 1
Cop 2
Dark Minion
Dark Zach
Dark Kenny
Dark Cop
Katherine (Ryan's mother)
Will (Ryan's brother)
Hank
Mike
Bruce
Larissa
Chris
Castiel
Armored Zombie
Jhereg
Shizo
Albranos
Esmeralda


Theme Song: (compliments to Kimo)

When the moon would set and the sun would dawn
We would all watch in triumph at the great wild fawn
I can feel the wind so close, so near
Then I realize it now; the time to soar is here

Fly high! Soarin' through the sky
Fly high! Comin' fast, so keep an eye
Here I come! Flyin' so high, so free
Watch Out! Here comes the Rising Prodigy

Into the dreams of tomorrow from the scars of yesterday
You better watch out, cause I'll blow you away
Valleys we crossed, and mountains we had to climb
I just gotta believe in myself this time

A storm is coming! Nature, give me the power
A storm is coming! I need to climb the tower
Here I come! Flyin' so high, so free
Watch Out! Here comes the Rising Prodigy

Starlight road, up ahead
But should I just turn back instead?
If united we stand, we'll make it through
So come along, we're gonna need you

[Guitar Solo]

Fly high! Soarin' through the sky
Fly high! Comin' fast, so keep an eye
Here I come! Flyin' so high, so free
Watch Out! Here comes the Rising Prodigy

Fly high! Soarin' through the sky
Fly high! Comin' fast, so keep an eye
Here I come! Flyin' so high, so free
Watch Out! Here comes the Rising Prodigy







This is just to get you guys started. I'll post the first chapter soon!

Something important to keep in mind. After i finished the fanfic, i changed my cards effect to try to perfect them as much as possible. So sometimes, the effects you see on the card will be different than what i explain in the dialogue. i hope that doesn't get too confusing for anybody!

Wow, I bet It's gonna be awesome.

99nour wrote:

Wow, I bet It's gonna be awesome.

lol i know i don't give an overview or anything, but that's just cause i'm too lazy to be honest. i'll post like 1 or 2 chapters a day depending on the chapter it is. There's soemthing funky that happens though, as the story goes on you can tell how i change the writing to make it improve. i was gonna go through all the old chapters to fix it, but i liked the idea of being able to see how far i went, so i kept it the same. So just a heads up - the laster chapters will be better than the early chapters but oh well!

please change the font of you text (you can't really see black on black.)

DigiDigi wrote:

please change the font of you text (you can't really see black on black.)

yeah i realized that lol it's cause i copy and pasted from word. so i just have to make the text white before i do color edits on the site, no big whoop.

Chapter 1 - The New Kid In Town



We begin with Ryan sitting on a bench in a town he just moved to with his grandfather. The town is Corona, California. It’s about 4 o’clock and Ryan is just chilling their with his eyes closed. All of a sudden you hear Raziel’s voice. Raziel appears.


Raziel: Hey! What in the world do you think your doing?!

Ryan: Whoa! *Turns to see Raziel* Ohh, hey Raz what’s up?

Raziel: What’s up? What’s up is your grandfather told you to do one very small task while he went away for the day and you have yet to do that!

Ryan: *thinking* Ohh right I forgot. Sorry. *looks around* So…what did he want again?

Raziel: *sighs* You’re so hopeless…he wanted you to go get more bread for him cause you ate it all.

Ryan: If I’m as hopeless as you say I am, why do you continue to stick around with me?

Raziel: *laughs* You know, I ask myself the same thing. But don’t forget I can leave whenever I want.

Ryan: (shocked) No don’t say that Raziel! I could never take another easy breath again if you were to leave!

Raziel: *laughs* So, I’m like asthma?

Ryan: Let’s just get the bread…


Ryan finally stands up and starts walking to the store. After walking for about 3 minutes, Ryan stops.


Ryan: Man, wish I knew where the store was.

Raziel: Why don’t you ask around then? See that guy right there? Ask him for directions.


Ryan runs up to the man as the man turns around. They bump into each other. Turns out this man is easily tempered.


Man: Hey! Watch we’re ya going! Ya dig what I’m sayin?

Ryan: Whoa sorry bro. Chill out. *Whisper to Raziel* I think this guy thinks he’s ghetto.

Man: Who are you talking to now punk?

Ryan: No one you can prove. Now who exactly are you?

Zach: The names Zach. And I don’t like your tude.

Ryan: Yeah? Well you better get used to it cause my "tude's" not leaving. So what are you gonna do?


Zach reaches into his backpack and takes out a duel disk.


Ryan: You want to duel?

Zach: Isn't it obvious? You’re a duelist aren’t ya?

Ryan: *smirks* You better believe it.

Zach: So then let’s go.

Ryan: You’re on!


Raziel appears next to Ryan.


Raziel: Ryan, you’re being sidetracked again. The bread remember? Your grandfathers gonna be home soon.

Ryan: Raz you worry too much. This’ll be over quick.

Ryan & Zach: Let’s duel!


Ryan & Zach both draw their opening hands and their LP counters are set to 4000.


Zach: I’ll make the first move. *draws* First I think I’ll activate the spell card, Ancient Rules! With this I now summon, the Red-Eyes Black Dragon in attack mode!


The field glows black and Red-Eyes flies out of the glow and roars


Ryan: (Check it out Raz. A Red-Eyes!) Good thing it can’t strike me yet cause he went first.

Zach: Actually, you’re wrong. Cause I play another Spell Card, Inferno Fire Blast! Now my Red-Eyes does damage to you equal to his original attack points! Get him Red-Eyes!


Red-Eyes flies up, and launches his attack. Ryan’s LP drop by 2400. Current LP = 1600


Ryan: Wow. That’s hot. *laughs*

Zach: And the worst is ahead. Now I trade in my Red-Eyes for a stronger one. Meet, the Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon!


A thick fire brews on the field, and the new Darkness Dragon emerges from the flames.


Ryan: I don’t like the looks of this situation. But the look of him sure is cool.

Raziel: This is not the time to let your guard down. That dragon will get stronger.

Ryan: It what?

Zach: Now that this dragon’s out, he’ll get 300 points stronger for every dragon in my graveyard. And right now I have 1, my Red-Eyes Black Dragon. So his attack points are now 2700.


Red-Eyes Darkness Dragon’s Attack points increase by 300. Current Values = 2700/2000.


Zach: Now, I’ll place 1 card face down, and let you go.


Turn moves to Ryan

Zach's LP = 4000
Zach's Hand = 1

Ryan's LP = 1600
Ryan's Hand = 5


Ryan: About time. *draws* Alright. I’m gonna discard 1 card from my hand to activate the spell card, Lightning Vortex! All that hard work is about to go down the drain! See ya Red-Eyes.


Ryan discards Rising Blessing to the graveyard as lightning crashes down around the Darkness Dragon until it’s destroyed.


Zach: What! So easily?!

Ryan: I guess you’re like everyone else in my old town. Full of themselves, careless, and just a bunch of talk! Now then, next I’m gonna summon this guy. Risgorgay, Rising Forest you’re on in attack mode.

Spoiler:

Ryan: And my Risgorgay gets a power boost just like your dragon did. But this boost is 100 more points for every spell and trap card you have out. I count 1, so now he has 1300 attack points.


Risgorgay's ATK increases by 100. Current Values = 1300/1200


Zach: Gahh, go figure.

Ryan: Risgorgay attack him directly with Forest Swipe!


Risgorgay leaps foreward into the air, and strikes down on Zach. Zach’s LP drops by 1300. Current LP = 2700.


Zach: Lucky punk…you’ll pay for that!

Ryan: Yeah, we’ll see about that. But for now I’m just gonna knock down a face down and end it at that.


Turn comes to Zach

Ryan's LP = 1600
Ryan's Hand = 2

Zach's LP = 2700
Zach's Hand = 1


Zach: Time for payback. I draw! *draws* I summon Divine Dragon Ragnarok in attack mode!


Divine Dragon Ragnarok flies from the sky, and down to the field.


Zach: Now Ragnarok Dragon, attack his Risgorgay!

Ryan: (Yepp, completely oblivious…)


Risgorgay is destroyed as Ragnarok swoops down and attacks him. Ryans LP drop by 300. Current LP – 1300


Ryan: Not to shabby. But you seem to of forgotten about my face down card Rising Call!

Spoiler:

Ryan: With this, I can now bring out another Rising monster. As long as the cards level is 4 at the highest. So I choose to bring out my Aeolus, Rising Wind!

Spoiler:

A fierce wind starts to blow around the playing field, and Aeolus forms from the gust and swings his sword.


Zach: Fine, do what you want I end my turn.


Turn comes to Ryan.

Zach's LP = 2700
Zach's Hand = 1


Ryan: Sweet. I draw! (now holds 3 cards) I summon Animark, Rising Hope.

Spoiler:

A bright light shines and Animark reveals herself


Ryan: Now I play Animark’s special ability. For every monster in your graveyard, she can give 100 attack points to any monster I choose, and I choose Animark herself.


Animark’s attack points rise to 1000. monsters in the grave are red-eyes black dragon and red eyes darkness dragon.


Ryan: Now Aeolus, attack his dragon!


Aeolus flies toward Divine Dragon Ragnarok.


Zach: Not so fast there dude, I activate my trap-

Ryan: *cutting Zach off* Sorry, but that won’t work. You see, when Aeolus attacks, you can’t play spell or traps until he’s done.

Zach: What? That can’t be!

Ryan: Oh, it be alright. Now Aeolus continue your attack, Hurricane Sword!


Aeolus slashes his sword, causing a fierce wind to blow. "Pieces" of the wind "sharpen" as they strike Divine Dragon Ragnarok, causing her to be destroyed and Zach's LP to drop by200. Current LP – 2500.


Ryan: And I’m not done. Now Aeolus’s 2nd ability activates. When he inflicts battle damage to you, a spell or trap card of my choosing is destroyed. And I choose your face down card.

Zach: Great…just great.


Aeolus points his sword toward Zach's face-down card. The sword shines white as a blast of wind emits from the tip. The wind strikes Zach's face-down, and Sakuretsu Armor is sent to the graveyard.


Ryan: Alright Animark, who now has 100 more attack points due to your Ragnarok’s recent destruction, your turn now. Attack him directly.


Light shines in Animark’s hands, and she throws the light toward Zach. Zach’s LP drop another 1100. Current LP – 1400.


Zach: You better be done.

Ryan: Well yea, for the most part. I toss a face down and end my turn.


Turn comes to Zach
Ryan’s LP – 1300
Zach’s LP - 1400


Zach: *draws* I play my Ancient Rules to summon my Cyber Tech Alligator! [Cyber Tech Alligator – 5/WIND/2500/1600]


Cyber Tech Alligator appears on the field in attack mode.


Zach: Now attack his Animark and wipe out his Life Points!

Raziel: Ryan!

Ryan: It’s all good Raz. Watch this.


Cyber-Tech Alligator continues to get closer and closer to Animark.


Ryan: I activate the trap card, Rising Storm!

Spoiler:

A firey pressense appears in the shape of a phoenix.


Ryan: My Rising Storm activates when you attack a Rising monster. Now I can destroy all your attack position monsters.


The phoenix fire bursts across the field, destroying Cyber Tech Alligator.


Zach: NO!

Ryan: haha, saweeet! See I told you its all good Raziel.

Zach: (angry) (I have nothing in my hand or on my field. This is over…)

Ryan: I'm gonna guess that your silence means it’s my move now. So I draw.


Turn moves to Ryan as he draws a card.


Ryan: Aeolus, attack and finish this!


Aeolus leaps in the air, and swings his sword causing a fierce wind to strike towards Zach.


Zach: *yells* NO!


Zachs LP drop by 1700
Current LP – 0


Ryan: *grinning* And that’s all.


The holograms fade away.


Ryan: Hey, thanks for a sweet duel. And now...I'm off.


Raziel appears near Ryan.


Raziel: Ryan, you forgetting something?

Ryan: Nahh its ok Raziel. I know gramps comes back soon.

Raziel: Yea he said he'd be home in about 20 minutes. You were supposed to buy bread remember?

Ryan: Oh. That’s right…but I told you, I don’t know where the store is. That’s a pretty good excuse too, don’t ya think?

Raziel: *laughs* I can’t rely on you for much can I?

Ryan: Sure you can. You just have to try. It’s easy, *chuckles* I rely on myself all the time.

Raziel: Some things never change...

please put images in spoilers or resize them.

DigiDigi wrote:

please put images in spoilers or resize them.

all i have to say is thank you to whoever did this for me haha cause i wouldn't know where to start! anyway i'm gonna post chapter 2 tonight so hopefully i learn how to do that soon, even though i didn't think it was a big deal D:

Chapter 2 – The Sibling



Chapter 2 begins early in the morning around 2:30 AM about 2 days later. Ryan is lying there sleeping when a glow appears through his bedroom window and we hear a kind of engine-humming sound. Raziel appears and tries to wake Ryan up.


Raziel: *shaking Ryan* Ryan, wake up. Hey c’mon get up Ry.

Ryan: *mumbling in his sleep* hmm…I don’t like those 2 circles.


The light is getting brighter and brighter and the engine louder and louder. Raziel walks over to the window and sneaks a peak outside to see a suspicious car just a few meters away. 2 of the doors open, and 2 men step outside.


Raziel: Who in the world could this be?


Raziel tries to make out their figure when she recognizes one of the 2 men. It was Zach from the duel on Ryan’s first day here. Raziel tries to wake up Ryan again.


Raziel: RYAN! GET UP!


Nothings working. Finally, Raziel decides to go to the kitchen and grab 2 frying pans. She brings them back to the room and smashes them together, creating a very loud noise.


Raziel: *smashing the pans together* Ryan!

Ryan: *panicing* Whaaaa?! Holy Guak Raziel! Why didn’t you just try shaking me or something?

Raziel: I did…

Ryan: Ohh. Well please, don’t ever wake me up like that again okay?

Raziel: Alright, next time I’ll just hit youu with the pan instead…

Ryan: humph. Very funny Raz.

Raziel: oh enough about this, look outside.


Ryan walks over to the window, peeking outside.


Ryan: Is that a car?

Raziel: Yeah but more importantly, see those 2 guys right there?

Ryan: Yeah, why?

Raziel: Haven’t you seen one of them before...


Ryan examines the 2 guys, in the most non-creepy way, and realizes that he’s looking at Zach.


Ryan: Whoa. Isn’t that Zach?

Raziel: Bingo.

Ryan: Well what are they doing here? And so early…

Raziel: I don’t know but it’s probly not good.

Ryan: well I’m going to find out.


Ryan grabs his deck and heads to the back door of his house. The scene now takes us to Zach and the other man, walking up to Ryan’s bedroom window.


Zach: Okay. According to what we dug up, this should be his house. And this window should be his bedroom window.

Man #2: well then what are you waiting for? Bust it open!

Zach: wait, if it is his house, then that means his grandpa lives here too. And I’ve heard that his grandpa is some crazy psycho who goes berserk when you-

Man #2: *cutting him off* Oh will you just open this window already! That story’s not true you ridiculous buffoon.

Zach: well it could be. And you know brother; I’m sick of you calling me names like that so just shut your mouth alright?


Scene takes us back to Ryan and Raziel on an adjacent side of the house. They are listening to the conversation. Man #2 becomes Zach’s brother from here on out.


Ryan: did he say…brother?

Raziel: uh-oh…do you think he wants his brother to get even or something?

Ryan: like getting back at me for dueling Zach and winning? Haha whatevs, as long as there’s a duel involved. I’m going out there.

Raziel: what? Wait hold on! We don’t even have-


Ryan’s already running towards the 2 brothers before Raziel can finish.


Raziel: …a game plan. *sighs* and you’re gone.


Ryan notices that they are trying to break into his room. He runs up to them.


Ryan: *running* hey! What do you think you’re doing?

Zach and Zach's Brother: Huh?

Ryan: (still running) yea I’m talking to you 2 clowns.

Zach’s brother: Clowns?


Ryan jumps up in the air and slams Zach right in the face with his foot causing him to fall to the ground. Ryan lands on the ground and jumps back up in the air to land a fist right in the face of Zach’s brother before he can do anything about it.


Raziel: Ryan, control yourself!

Ryan: What is it you 2 are looking for?

Zach: *trying to get up* we were looking...for you.


Ryan put his foot on Zach’s back to prevent him from getting up.


Ryan: And why’s that?

Zach’s Brother: because I wanted to duel you. You defeated my brother in a duel, disgracing our name. that’s why I want to duel you.

Ryan: well then why didn’t you say so. Lets do this.


Ryan and Zach’s brother take out their duel disks, toss their decks in them, draw their opening hands, they’re Life Points are set, and the duel begins.


To be continued…

how the heck u have that time for typing
any way cool story w8ing for the next chapter


edit: Ryan jumps up in the air and slams Zach right in the face with his foot causing him to fall to the ground. Ryan lands on the ground and jumps back up in the air to land a fist right in the face of Zach’s brother before he can do anything about it LOL

I have read this fanfic, i loved it xD

kiryu xD

and silver, i already finished this fanfic lol so the time i had to write it was awhile ago. thanks for reading, i'll post the next chapter before i go to bed tonight :D

Chapter 3 – A Sibling part 2.


*We left off with Ryan finding out that Zach and his nameless brother were trying to find Ryan in his house by tracking him down. Ryan found out about this and let them have it. After, he finds out that Zach’s brother wants revenge on Ryan for defeating his little brother. And now, let’s see what happens.


Ryan: Ready when you are.

Zach’s Brother: I’ve been ready for about 2 days, it just took awhile to figure out where you live.

Ryan: Right…that’s not creepy or anything.

Zach’s Brother: Enough! I’m gonna start the hurt (pause) with this!


*Zach’s Brother draws a card both players Life Points are 4000.


Zach’s Brother: I hope you’re ready. I summon Darkfire Soldier #1 in attack mode! [Darkfire Soldier #1/FIRE/4/1700/1150]


*A strong fire appears on the field, and out comes Darkfire Soldier.


Zach’s Brother: Then I’ll place this face down. Your move dude.

Ryan: *Drawing a card* Here ‘goes.


*Ryan looks at his hand and notices Raziel, Rising Dawn is in his hand.


Ryan: Ohh, hey Raz.

Zach’s Brother: Oh yea, Zach did say that you talk to yourself randomly.

Ryan: (Oh boy do these brothers have a lot to learn.) By the way I still don’t know your name. knowing your name would make this much easier.

Zach’s Brother: my name is Kenny. Plain and simple.


*Zach’s brother becomes Kenny from now on.


Ryan: alright. Anyway back to the duel. I activate the Field Spell Card, Rising Oracle.

Spoiler:

*The Oracle’s Symbol appears above them in the sky, and a mixture of colors falls across the field.


Ryan: Now whenever I summon a Rising monster, an Oracle counter gets placed on this card. And by removing a certain number of counters from it I can Special Summon a Rising monster from my hand, deck, or graveyard to my field with a level equal to that of the number of counters I removed. Also, when I take Battle Damage from battles involving Rising monsters, you take the same damage I do unless you discard a card in your hand. Now that’s a mouthful.

Kenny: That’s quite a field spell you got there kid.

Ryan: you haven’t seen anything yet. Now I activate another spell card, Brain Control. [Brain Control - Pay 800 Life Points. Select 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field. Take control of the selected card until the End Phase of the turn this card is activated.] with this I’ll gain control over your soldier.


*Ryan’s LP drop by 800 as Darkfire Soldier changes sides. Current LP = 3200


Ryan: Next, I Summon Jhereg, Rising Air in attack mode.

Spoiler:

*Jhereg appears before them, and an Oracle Counter gets placed on Rising Oracle.


Ryan: Now Jhereg, attack him directly.


*Jhereg flies foreword and nocks Kenny down. Kenny’s LP drop by 1400. Current LP = 2600


Ryan: and I’ll follow it up with your monster. Darkfire Soldier, attack..


*Darkfire Soldier slashes his sword at Kenny, following with a wave of fire. Kenny’s LP drop by 1700. Current LP = 900.


Kenny: you’re one annoying punk you know that?

Ryan: at least I’m on the winning side of the field. I’ll end with a face down.


*turn comes to Kenny as Darkfire Soldier returns to him.


Kenny: winning side of the field? Please. you've only had 1 turn

Ryan: yea and look what i did in just one turn...

Kenny: shut it. time for payback.

Ryan: you know, I think your brother said that same thing right before I beat him too…

Kenny: just shut up kid. I draw (draws a card. Now holding 5 cards) I summon Invasion of Flames in attack mode. [Invasion of Flames/FIRE/Pyro/3/1300/1200/ When this card is Normal Summoned successfully, no Trap Cards can be activated.] Now that you can’t play traps, I’ll attack with my soldier. and to make sure i dont take damage, i'll discard Flame Ruler from my hand.


*Darkfire Soldier lunges toward Jhereg. Jhereg is destroyed. Ryan’s LP drop by 300. Kenny Discards Gaia Soul the Combustible Collective to negate his damage. Ryan LP = 2900


Ryan: I may not be able to play traps, but Jhereg’s special ability is another story. Now I can bring out a level 4 or lower Rising monster from my deck and I summon Poseidon, Rising Water in attack mode.

Spoiler:

*A flow of water occurs, and Poseidon Rising from the water. An Oracle Counter is placed on Rising Oracle. Current counters = 2


Kenny: (disappointed) fine. I place this face down and end my turn.


*Ryan’s LP = 2900
Kenny’s LP = 900
Turn comes to Ryan


Ryan: ok. Time for the last turn. *draws a card* (now holding 3 cards)

Zach: hmmm?

Ryan: First I activate my face down card Rising Elements to add Bermuda, Rising Torrent from my deck to my hand.

Spoiler:

Kenny: so it wasn't even a trap anyway?

Ryan: nope, and next I activate the Spell card Heavy Storm and destroy both your face downs. And since there is a Rising monster on my field, my Rising Oracle is safe. [Heavy Storm - Destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field.].


*Mirror Force and Backfire are sent to the graveyard.


Ryan: now I play my Lightning Vortex to destroy all your monsters by discarding Bermuda from my hand. [Lightning Vortex - Discard 1 card from your hand. Destroy all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field.]


*Lightning crashes around the field while destroying both of Kenny’s monsters.


Kenny: this can’t be happening! he just wiped out my entire field in one turn.

Ryan: oh it’s happening alright. Now I summon Raziel, Rising Dawn from my hand. Show yourself, my friend!

Spoiler:

*Raziel shines bright as she appears on the field and an Oracle counter is placed on Rising Oracle. Current counters = 3.


Ryan: I activate Raziel’s special ability. By removing a monster in my opponent’s graveyard from play, I can give her all of that monsters attack points on top of her own. So I remove Darkfire Soldier in your graveyard from play to give Raziel 1700 more attack points.


*Raziel spreads her wings. They start to shine and glisten a red-like color as her attack points climb up to 2200.


Ryan: alright Raz lets finish this. Attack him directly with, Trident Slash!


*Raziel lifts her arms up and her 2 swords materialize in her hands. She swipes down in Kenny’s direction as 2 crescent waves slice out of the swing of her swords. Kenny’s LP drop by 2200. Current LP = 0


Ryan: *grins* and that’s all.


*The holograms fade but we can still see the spirit of Raziel.


Zach: see! Even you lost Kenny!

Kenny: just can it little brother. We are leaving.

Ryan: well thanks for a duel anyway. But no more looking up where people live. It’s kinda freaky.

Raziel: the thought of that may bring me nightmares.

Ryan: *laughs* I’m just glad I can go back to sleep. So goodnight Raz.


*Raziel fades away as Ryan walks back to the backdoor of his house and lets himself inside. He goes back to his room, and goes back to bed. After a few minutes, he looks up at the ceiling thinking to himself.


Ryan: you know the thought of that really would actually bring me nightmares.

Chapter 4 – The Lonely Hearts Club


*it’s been about a week since Ryan moved into town. He seems to have already made some rivals, but yet no friends? Hmm…will this chapter change all that?


Grandpa: (in a harmonized kind of way) ohh Ryan! Lunch is set to be eaten. Although I’m not sure I would trust the turkey. It’s about 1 week out of date. But those telemarketer people just put that on to scare us all that’s what I say.

Ryan: (staring at the turkey) well that turkey sure is scary alright. I don’t think it’s supposed to be green colored gramps. I think your eyesight’s going quicker than we think.

Grandpa: no I sure don’t think so. I bet it still tastes good.

Ryan: actually, I think the site of this turkey has turned me into a vegetarian…

Grandpa: *laughs* well there is plenty of other items to choose from Ryan.

Ryan: yepp I’m well aware.


*Ryan grabs some ham, meatloaf, mashed potatoes and gravy to put it on top.


Ryan: wait just a minute here…no pizza?!

Grandpa: um, no? I wasn’t plan-

Ryan: (cutting him off) I gotta run and get some! Be right back.


*Ryan runs out the front door. About 5 seconds later he walks back in.


Ryan: wait. I spent all my money on those jumbo sized slurpy’s. can I borrow $10?

Grandpa: did you have a brain freeze when you drank those slurpy’s?

Ryan: um, yess?

Grandpa: (laughing) well then sure! Heres $10.

Ryan: well okk?


*Ryan runs out the front door…again. He runs into town, and then stops. Raziel appears next to him.


Raziel: why are we stopping?

Ryan: I uh, kinda still haven’t figured out where the store is…

Raziel: *laughs* well good luck with that. You know, you could always ask-

Ryan: (cutting her off) no I will not ask people again! Last time I did that I gained a creep stalker who found out where I lived and woke me up at 2 in the morning! I didn’t sleep for at least 2 days Raz…

Raziel: *laughs* I told you that thought would bring nightmares.

Ryan: don’t remind me. But now I’m gonna try to find the store without asking for help.


*Raziel fades away as Ryan looks around town for the store for about 10 minutes. it seems that he cant find it. When he thinks that all hope is lost, a young girl named Sarah walks up to him.


Sarah: hey. You seem lost, so I’m gonna guess you’re new around here.

Ryan: (completely amazed by her appearance) yeah, hey. I moved here to live with my grandfather about a week ago. But I’m not lost. I just sorta expected the department store to be in this spot, but its not…

Sarah: *laughs* yea that’s what they call “lost” well I’m Sarah. Can I help?

Ryan: (shocked) I’m Ryan. And that depends. Would your boyfriend be ok with this?

Sarah: I’m single.

Ryan: (quickly) you may help me.


*Sarah shows Ryan where the store is, and he buys the pizza. Sarah then shows him the rest of the town. When they are finished, Ryan is walking alongside her when he realizes she’s wearing a deck holder attached to her belt.


Ryan: wait a sec. you’re a duelist?

Sarah: well yea who isn’t these days?

Ryan: well, my grandpa.

Sarah: (laughing) okk. but you are right?

Ryan: ohh right yea I’m one too.

Sarah: hey, how about a-

Ryan: (completing her question) a friendly duel? Sounds good to me.

Sarah: wow already completing my thoughts ayy? Not badd, not badd.

Ryan: *laughs* hey don’t sound so surprised. You ready to do this?

Sarah: absolutely.

Ryan: nice. Ahh but wait. I totally forgot my grandpa’s waiting for me back home. We were gonna have lunch but he made this weird colored out of date turkey so I went and bought pizza. *chuckles*

Sarah: *laughs* that’s pretty random. Can I come too?

Ryan: (surprised) sure! Wait, how old are you?

Sarah: 17.

Ryan: (quickly) you can definitely come home with me.


*Ryan takes Sarah back home with him. They eat lunch together, then head to the living room.


Sarah: so about that friendly duel?

Ryan: you want to have it now?

Sarah: ahh 2 for 2. you’re pretty good at that.

Ryan: *laugh* maybe I’m psychic?

Sarah: *laugh* lets do this.


*Ryan and Sarah take their Duel Disks out of their bags and place their decks inside them. Both players LP are set to 4000.


Ryan & Sarah: lets go!


To be continued…

I figured putting the one chapter in a spoiler would be easier than putting every card in a spoiler lol. also, the card maker isn't cooperating right now, so i'll have to put the card images in there after. sorry guys!

Spoiler:

Chapter 6 - The Messenger




*the time is 3:21 p.m. and Ryan decides to go give Sarah a visit. Once he gets to her front door, he stops. Raziel appears.



Raziel: wow I cant believe your actually hesitating to see Sarah. *laughs*

Ryan: no its not that Raz. I feel like something is here.

Raziel: like in her house? Your sense of Spirits may be getting in the way. You could just be sensing Honest.

Ryan: I guess you’re right. But I don’t know, I’ve felt uneasy ever since we stepped out of my house.

Raziel: (confused) well everything seems normal around here. I wouldn’t worry too much about it.

Ryan: yeah, I guess you’re right.


*Ryan tries to ignore what he’s feeling and knocks on Sarah’s door.


Ryan: hey Sarah! You home?


*there is no answer. Ryan tries again, and then Honest appears.


Honest: *laughs* boy this girl is smart. Sarah had to go run some errands so she told me to stay here just incase you came to her door so I could deliver you the message.

Ryan: *laughs* she’s always 1 step ahead. Well how ya’ doing Honest?

Honest: honestly, I’ve been uneasy lately. i feel like something is coming.

Ryan: wait you too? (to Raziel) see Raz I told you so.

Raziel: alright I’ll admit it. I have felt it too. Ever since this morning. I just didn’t want to worry you Ryan.

Ryan: well I guess that’s understandable.

Honest: Sarah has felt this feeling as well. I don’t know what it is. But I hope it’s nothing.

Ryan: yea true that. Well it was good too see you again Honest. (chuckling) I know not many people get that chance. But I’m off. hey, why dont you come with us? beats staying here alone.

Honest: sure.


*Ryan, Raziel, and Honest attempt to go back home, but are interrupted by a fierce wind.


Ryan: (struggling to see) what in the world?

Raziel: could this be it?


*a yellow wave starts to cover the woods behind Ryan and Sarah’s houses. It streams around to the front of Ryan, Raziel, and Honest. The wind dies down, and the wave disappears, but not before leaving the figure of a human behind.


Mysterious Human: you will not take another step further.

Ryan: can I have a reason? I’m pretty hungry. I kinda skipped lunch.

Mysterious Man: if you knew what was about to take place in this world, you would not joke.

Raziel: well you don’t exactly know Ryan that well. it’s kinda all he does.

Honest: *trying to get back on topic* all 3 of us here, including 1 other person, have felt your presence. who are you and what are you doing here?

Whyet: my name is Whyet. I am a messenger from the light coming to warn the only one who can save you from a force making its way around the world.

Ryan: you’re not kidding. Who is this person?

Whyet: it is you, young pineapple seed.

Raziel: Pineapple Seed?

Ryan: that’s the strangest thing I’ve ever been called. And boy have there been strange ones. But how can I help?

Whyet: you have a gift Ryan. A gift different from anyone else. And I have come to get you to realize that.

Ryan: this is too crazy. Are you sure I’m the right person for the job?

Whyet: I am positive. And in order to get this power to unlock inside you, I need to duel you. And if you cannot defeat me there is no way you will defeat this phenomena about to occur.

Ryan: well I am so confused, but I wont ever back down from a duel. let’s do this.


*Ryan steps backwards a few yards and turns back around to face Whyet. Ryan takes his duel disk out of his bag, places it on his left arm, and places his deck in it ready to go. Whyet’s left arm begins to glow yellow, and then forms a duel disk.


Ryan: talk about a way to save space. Are you ready Whyet?

Whyet: I am. But the question should really be, are you?

Ryan: absolutely. Game on!



To be continued…

Chapter 7 – The Messenger Part 2


*last time we saw Ryan, he was heading to Sarah’s house to see what she was up to. Honest answers instead of Sarah, telling Ryan that Sarah went out on some errands. Ryan, Raziel, and Honest have all felt an uneasy feeling since the day began. Ignoring it, Ryan invites Honest back at his place, but on the way back all 3 of them are interrupted by a mysterious character who called himself Whyet. Whyet came to warn Ryan about what was going to happen, followed by the face that Ryan has to save the world. Ryan can’t believe his ears, especially when he’s told that somewhere inside him, is a mystic power that only he possesses. Whyet challenges Ryan to a duel, telling Ryan that he must defeat him in order to stand a chance against the force that was coming.




*Ryan and Whyet’s Life Points are set to 4000. The duel begins as they draw their opening hands.


Ryan: I’ll start off. *draws* I activate the spell card, Rising Elements!

Spoiler:

Ryan: with this I can take Violiar, Rising Shadows from my deck and add him to my hand. *Ryan shuffles his deck* and now I’m gonna summon him in attack mode.

Spoiler:

*A black aura appears on the field, and Violiar Rises out of it.


Ryan: next I’ll just knock down a face down and call it a turn.


*Turn moves to Whyet


Whyet: my draw *draws* I activate the spell card, Solar Recharge [Solar Recharge - Discard 1 "Lightsworn" monster. Draw 2 cards. After, send 2 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard.]

Whyet: I discard Garoth, Lightsworn Warrior from my hand to the graveyard. Then I draw 2 cards. And then after that I send the top 2 cards of my deck to the graveyard.


*Foolish Burial, and Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress are sent to the graveyard.


Whyet: and now I summon Jain, Lightsworn Paladin in attack mode! [Jain, Lightsworn Paladin/4/LIGHT/Warrior/1800/1200/ If this card attacks an opponent's monster, it gains 300 ATK during the Damage Step only. During each of your End Phases, send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.]


*light takes over the field, and Jain is formed.


Whyet: now Jain, attack his Violiar.


*Jain leaps foreward to attack Violiar.


Whyet: ohh, by the way when Jain attacks a monster he gets 300 points stronger during the battle.

Ryan: what the..?


*Violiar is destroyed. Ryan takes 600 points of damage. Current LP = 3400


Whyet: *grinning* next I’ll set one card and end my turn. And it is at this point, that Jain sends the top 2 cards of my deck to the graveyard.


*Lumina, Lightsworn Summoner, and Wulf, Lightsworn Beast are sent to the graveyard.


Whyet: and since my Wulf was sent to the graveyard from my deck, he gets special summoned to my field. [Wulf, Lightsworn Beast/4/LIGHT/Beast-Warrior/2100/300/ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.]


*Wulf is special summoned to the field in attack mode. he swipes his claws at the air.


Whyet: Ryan! You are going to have to do much better than this to defeat me, or the dark force.

Ryan: don’t worry it’s just been one turn.


*Turn moves to Ryan


Ryan: my draw. *draws a card now has 5 cards in his hand* I reveal my trap card, Rising Spirits!

Spoiler:

Ryan: with this, I can special summon my Violiar back to my field in attack mode. So come on back old friend.


*a fire erupts on the field. Violiar is summoned back.


Ryan: Next, I Release my Violiar to summon Arkrad, Rising Frost!

Spoiler:

*Violiar vanishes, and Arkrad takes the field.


Ryan: with Arkrad’s special ability, I can pay 500 life points to bring back the Rising monster I released. So I return Violiar to my hand.


Whyet: well you get your Violiar, but not your Arkrad. cause I play my trap card Bottomless Trap Hole. So your Arkrad is removed from the game.


Ryan: (angered) what a dirty trick.

Whyet: watch that anger Ryan! This dark force already knows your whereabouts from your previous anger toward Zach and his Brother.

Ryan: (confused) how would you know that?

Raziel: was he spying?

Ryan: I don’t think so, cause I only recently started feeling his presence.

Whyet: correct, I was not spying. But I have learned about you Ryan. And although you are the only one who can stop this force from occurring, you are also the most vulnerable because of your lack of self control.

Ryan: wait so, if I’m not careful, this thing could take me over?

Whyet: *nods* that is what it does. It finds someone with the most anger close by, and gets itself inside their souls. If not taken care of, this phenomena will spread and contaminate everyone so there will be no way of anyone will be saved. Although, if you cannot defeat me right here and now, you won’t be able to save anybody, including yourself

Raziel: Ryan…

Ryan: (thinking to himself) how could this happen. Here I am just trying to have fun in this new place, and leave all my troubles behind in my old town. But yet trouble still manages to find me. This is serious. If I don’t step up my game here, we’re all done for…


to be continued...

Chapter 8 – The Messanger Part 3


*Whyet seems to have had the upper hand in this duel the entire time. He warns Ryan that he must play a lot better than he has been in order to defeat what’s about to occur. So lets see how the duel plays out from here.
Whyet LP = 4000
Ryan LP = 3400


Whyet: do you understand now?! You must duel with everything you’ve got. And you can start right here. It’s still your turn after all.

Ryan: oh, right. Okay. I play, Hammer Shot! [Hammer Shot – Destroy 1 face-up Attack Position monster with the highest ATK on the field. (If it’s a tie, you get to chose.)]

Ryan: with this, I’ll target your Wulf, Lightsworn Beast and destroy it.


*a circular shadow appears around Wulf. Wulf looks up to see a giant hammer swinging down at him. Few moments later, Wulf is destroyed.

Whyet: *blown back from the force* whoa. That’s more like it Ryan.

Ryan: I told you, I’m just getting started. A few spells and traps from you won’t keep me down. Now then, I’m gonna knock down 2 face downs and end it at that.


*turn moves to Whyet


Whyet: I hope you’re ready kid. *draws* (holding 5 cards.) with 4 Lightsworn monsters with different names in my graveyard, I can call upon the mightiest of dragons. I summon, Judgment Dragon! [Judgment Dragon/8/LIGHT/Dragon/3000/2600/ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having 4 or more "Lightsworn" monsters with different names in your Graveyard. You can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all other cards on the field. During each of your End Phases, send the top 4 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.]


*a fierce wind plagues the field as limb by limb Judgment Dragon is formed.


Ryan: (amazed) he’s huge!

Whyet: and so is his special ability. I pay 1000 Life Points to destroy every card on the field other than himself. Now lets get to it Judgment Dragon.


*Judgment Dragon lifts his head high and roars. His body begins to glow yellow as it spreads over the field, destroying everything. Jain, Lightsworn Paladin, Rising Flare, and Magic Cylinder are sent to the graveyard.


Whyet: now you’re wide open. So go Judgment Dragon. Attack Ryan directly.


*Judgment Dragon opens his mouth. Inside, it begins to glow yellow until Judgment Dragon releases a yellow blast from his jaw. It strikes Ryan, causing him to be blown backwards. Ryan yells as he falls to the ground. Current LP = 400


Ryan: ouch. That sure did hurt. Why could I feel that?

Whyet: the nature of every duel with the dark force will cause you too feel the pain of every attack thrown at you. This applies to both players. You better get used to it.

Ryan: oh great. Well are you done now?

Whyet: *thinking* yes. After I play this face down card. Now it’s your turn.


*turn moves to Ryan.
Ryan LP = 400
Whyet LP = 3000


Ryan: boy do I need a draw. Whyet has enough Life Points to use that dragon’s effect again next turn. If a guy ever needed a miracle draw, this would be it. *draws* (holding 3 cards.) sweetness! I hope you’re prepared now Whyet. Cause I play the spell card Rising Miracle!

Spoiler:

*a shapeless figure appears in front of them.


Ryan: see what my Miracle does is allow me to use any spell or trap card that was used by either player at the cost of half my Life Points. And the card I choose, is the Hammer Shot Spell card in my graveyard.


*Ryan’s LP drop to 200. the figure takes the shape of a hammer and destroys Judgment Dragon.


Whyet: that’s quite a card you got there Ryan. But I’m not giving up. In order to awaken whats within you I must duel you with everything I have. (looks at Ryan carefully) wait a minute. (content with his actions) it turns out that I’ve already accomplished it. Do you not see it Ryan?


*Ryan takes a minute to look around, not knowing he's supposed to be looking at himself. but then he notices that he has a white Aura forming around him that never seems to stop waving or moving.


Ryan: what is this?

Raziel: is this what Whyet was talking about?

Whyet: this is your special gift Ryan. You have the power of the Rising within you. Learn to control it, and live with it. For it is this power that will help you defeat this evil coming.

Ryan: well I don’t know too much about it, but I like it (laughs and turns to Raziel) check me out Raz I’m glowing!

Honest: (spooked) Ryan, your eyes are kinda, white.

Ryan: my eyes change too? Ohh boy this gets better and better.

Whyet: don’t forget your purpose Ryan. And don’t forget about this duel as well. It’s till your turn

Ryan: oh right sorry. i forgot (laughs) anyway. I summon, my Violiar!

Spoiler:

Ryan: now Violiar, attack him directly with, Shadow Grip!


*Violiar flings his right arm full of tentacle-like structures and prepares to rap them around Whyet.


Whyet: sorry, but did you honestly think I couldn’t see this coming?

Ryan: that doesn’t sound good.

Whyet: no its not, especially when the card I have face down is Dimensional prison! [Dimensional Prison - Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Remove from play the attacking monster.]


*Violiar vanishes right before striking Whyet.


Ryan: alrighty then time for plan B. since this card is the only card in my hand, I can special summon it to my field. so rise, Prometheus, Rising Doom in defense mode. Bet you didnt see this coming!

Spoiler:

*Prometheus lunges foreword proudly, the heals.


Ryan: your move Whyet.


*turn moves to Whyet.


Whyet: *draws* (holding 4 cards now) I summon Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress in attack mode. [Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress/4/LIGHT/Spellcaster/1700/200/ You can change this card from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position and destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, this card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect. During each of your End Phases, send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard.]


*Lyla appears out of a quick flash of light.


Ryan: how many Lightsworn monsters can one guy have…

Whyet: now Lyla attack Prometheus!


*Lyla lunges foreward and sends a blast of light heading toward Prometheus. Prometheus is destroyed.


Whyet: what now Ryan? You have no cards on the field or in your hand.

Ryan: I’m gonna do what I always do in a situation like this. Trust my deck. My deck always gives me what I need. (to himself) Plus I think this power is trying to tell me it’s here to help. I’m not sure how to explain it. But I have to trust it. It’s now or never…



To be continued…

Chapter 9 – The Messenger Part 4


*we left off on Whyett’s turn. He is about to end his turn, leading the duel to Ryan. Ryan has no cards in his hand, or on the field. Can he turn it around?



Whyet: since it’s my end phase now, Lyla’s effect causes me to send the top 3 cards of my deck to the graveyard.


*Solar Recharge, Monster Reincarnation, and Celestia, Lightsworn Angel are sent to the graveyard. Deck count = 26


*Turn moves to Ryan


Ryan: alright Raz, this is it. You hear that Whyet? I’m putting everything I have into this last draw so I can prove to you that I will not fail this quest! So get ready cause its my draw now! *draws* (holding just 1 card now)


*Whyet, stands there with a serious look on his face, looks at Ryan. Ryan grins. A few seconds later, Sarah comes back home only to find a duel going on in front of her house.


Sarah: Ryan, what exactly is going on here?

Ryan: oh, hey Sarah. Nothing really. I’m just dueling to save the world is all.

Sarah: wait, what? Save the world?

Ryan: yeah. It’s crazy, but I’ll explain everything later, including why I’m glowing *laughs*

Sarah: um, ok.


*Ryan takes a look at the card he drew. He drew Raziel, Rising Dawn.


Ryan: Perfect timing Raziel. Looks like you’re up pal. Alright I summon my Raziel, Rising Dawn in attack mode!

Spoiler:

*Raziel shines bright as she spreads her wings and makes her appearance on the field.


Ryan: ready Whyet? Cause I play Raziel’s special ability. By removing a monster in you’re graveyard from play, I can increase Raziel’s ATK strength by the removed monsters. So I’m removing Judgment Dragon in your graveyard from play to power up Raziel by 3000!


*Raziel spreads her wings out wide as they begin to shine once again. Her attack points climb up to 3500.


Ryan: alright Raziel, attack his Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress with Trident Slash!


*Raziel flies up as her swords materialize in her hands. She swipes down at Lyla, creating red crescent waves. Lyla is destroyed. Whyet receieves 1800 points of damage. Current LP = 1200.


Ryan: but I’m not done yet. Cause now Raziel inflicts damage to you equal to your monsters level x100.


*Raziel shines bright in front of Whyet, causing him to lose 400 Life Points. Ryan ends his turn as Raziel’s attack points drop back down to 500.

Ryan LP = 200
Whyet LP = 800


Ryan: I’ll end it at that.


*Turn moves to Whyet.


Whyet: *draws* (holding 4 cards) well Ryan. What are you going to do now? You’re Raziel is completely defenseless out there.

Ryan: are you gonna make a move, or just continue to taunt me?

Whyet: fine then. I’m sorry Ryan, but I’m afraid this is the end. I activate the spell card Monster Reborn [Monster Reborn - Select 1 monster from either you or your opponent's Graveyard. Special Summon the selected monster on your side of the field.]

Whyet: now I summon back to the field Lyla, Lightsworn Sorceress. But now I’m just going to Release her to summon Celestia, Lightsworn Angel in attack mode! [Celestia, Lightsworn Angel/5/LIGHT/Fairy/2300/200/When you Advanced Summon this card by Releasing a "Lightsworn" monster, you can send the top 4 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy up to 2 cards your opponent controls.]


*light covers the field, and Celestia reveals herself.



Whyet: and my Celestia has a very special ability. If she’s advanced summoned by releasing a Lightsworn monster I can destroy up to 2 cards on the field.

Ryan: that’s not good.

Whyet: say goodbye to your Raziel Ryan!


*Celestia shines bright, and then it seems like out of nowhere Raziel is destroyed.


Ryan: (angered) NO! Raziel! You’re going to regret this Whyet.

Whyet: how many time do I have to tell you to control your anger Ryan! But I guess it doesn’t matter, cause you’re about to lose this duel. which means you probly wont be able to defeat this darkness coming.


*Ryan has a blank look on his face.


Whyet: Farewell Ryan. Now then, Celestia, Lightsworn Angel attack him directly and end this duel.

Ryan: c’mon don’t count me out yet. I activate a special ability from my graveyard!

Whyet: from the grave?

Ryan: that’s right. see when you declare an attack, I can remove Rising Miracle in my graveyard from play to negate that 1 attack!


*Ryan’s duel disk begins to glow, and the Rising Miracle Shapeless body appears. It covers Celestia causing her to miss her target. The Miracle disappears.


Ryan: (relieved) that was close.

Whyet: yes. But I assure you, next turn you will not be so lucky.

Ryan: if you have a next turn. Cause it’s my turn now. And anything can happen. So here I go.


*turn moves to Ryan as he draws a card.


Ryan: (holding 1 card) I play, Monster Reborn! [Monster Reborn - Select 1 monster from either you or your opponent's Graveyard. Special Summon the selected monster on your side of the field.]

Ryan: now I can special summon any monster back from the graveyard. I choose, the one and only Raziel, Rising Dawn!


*Raziel shines bright as she re-appears on the field.


Ryan: alright Raz. Lets end this duel shall we? I activate Raziel’s special ability. So I remove the other Celestia, Lightsworn Angel in your graveyard from play to add 2300 attack points to Raziel.


*Raziel spreads her wings. They begin to glow and glisten as her attack points rise up to 2800.


Ryan: now Raziel attack his Celestia!


*Raziel’s swords appear in her hands, and she slams them down on Celestia. Celestia, Lightsworn Angel is destroyed and Whyet takes 500 points of damage. Current LP = 300.


Ryan: and lets not forget her 2nd ability. You take damage equal to your monsters level x100. so that’s 500 more. Game over Whyet!


*Raziel appears in front of Whyet and begins to glow, inflicting 500 points of damage to Whyet. Current LP = 0.


Ryan: and that’s all.

Whyet: Ryan. Well done.

Sarah: what a duel Ryan. I wish I could of seen the beginning.

Ryan: *laughing* Whyet. I’m not going to forget you. Thanks for all your help.


*The Rising aura around Ryan fades away. The dueling field returns to normal. Raziel remains visable.


Whyet: Ryan, before you go. I have something for you.


*Whyet hands Ryan a Duel Monsters Card.


Ryan: whats this?


*Ryan looks at the card, and is stunned at what he is looking at. The card is Arkados, Rising Life.

Spoiler:

Ryan: I've seen this beast before. But only in my dreams.

Whyet: It was created from the Rising within you. You forged this card with this very duel. That is why it was so important for you to win. Take good care of yourself Ryan. I wish you the best of luck on this mission. just keep in mind that this evil is stronger than i am. you will have to train extra hard.

Ryan: i'll give it my all. thanks for everything Whyet. Do you think we’ll ever get to duel again?

Whyet: *laughing* maybe one day Ryan. Maybe one day.


*Whyet fades away.


Ryan: ok! Who’s hungry!?

Sarah: you’re thinking about food right now?

Ryan: *laughing* yeah, that’s what I wanted to do right before this Whyet guy came. I’m starving.

Sarah: *laughing* well, I am a bit hungry.

Ryan: alright. Lets go eat.


*Ryan, Sarah, Raziel, and Honest all go to Ryan’s house. Sarah had a cheeseburger, and Ryan had 4. once he was content with his hunger. They went to watch some tv.


Sarah: so, do you think you’re grandpa even wondered just a bit about what was going on outside his house?

Ryan: nahh. He probly couldn’t even hear it. he’s getting old. I just hope he’s alive long enough to see me save the world. hopefully I can do everything Whyet was telling me.

Sarah: oh yea. I missed the beginning. Care to fill me in?


*Ryan explains to Sarah the hole situation of this Phenonena that will soon occur. She is shocked at the news. Then Ryan tells her about the duel, and “the Rising” that’s within him. She almost can’t believe her ears, but she saw enough today to believe it. Honest appears.

Ryan: aren't ya' glad you were talked into coming to my house Honest?

Honest: (sarcastically) ohh absolutely Ryan. the walk to your house was very...uneventfull.

wow i really hope i can find this! i need to post many new chapters lol

found it! :D




Chapter 10 – The First Victim



*Ryan is still in shock about everything he learned from his duel with Whyet from 3 days ago. He doesn’t like too admit it to protect his reputation, but he feels a bit nervous about the whole thing. Sarah stays with him a lot more just too be sure they are both safe. Honest and Raziel are also watching over them. However, this scene does not start off with Ryan, or Sarah. Instead we go back to a previous character we’ve seen – Zach.


*Zach is sitting inside his house at night when we see him for the first time in weeks. He is still very angered about losing the duel with Ryan, and even more angry about the fact that his brother lost to him as well.


Zach: (angry) how could that little swine defeat MY family?! I played flawlessly, probably even better than my brother did. but yet Ryan manages to take out my Darkness Dragon with just one card?! Impossible. Yea I know, he must of cheated. Yea that’s it he cheated! Well I’m going to make a new deck and put Ryan in his place! I hope you’re ready Ryan…NOT.


*Zach begins making a new deck to duel Ryan with. About halfway done, he hears a kind of “rushing water” sound outside his window. He opens it up, but doesn’t see water. Instead he sees this blackish-purple wave streaming towards his house.


Zach: what the? What’s going on?


*the wave is not stopping. It gets closer and closer, and Zach farther and Farther away from his window. The wave breaks through his window, leaving Zach cornered. The aura envelops Zach. Zach struggles to get away but it’s no use. The wave has completely covered him. Zach hears a voice.


Mysterious voice: I could sense your anger and hatred toward Ryan. I also heard you were about to make a new deck to defeat him with. Well I’m sorry, but you don’t know Ryan, and you would have still lost. But if you let me take over and consume you, you will be able to defeat Ryan.

Zach: (scared) what the heck are you?

Mysterious Voice: I am the dark force coming for Ryan. If you do not obey me, I will have no choice but to force you too…


*the aura swallows up Zach. Then slowly, the wave fades away leaving Zach’s body there on the ground. By this point, the dark force is in control of Zach.


Dark Zach: hmm. Not a bad host. (looking out the window) you better watch out Ryan. (starts to laugh as a blackish-purple aura appears around him) because I’m coming for you.


*the next morning Ryan and Sarah are outside looking around in the woods. They thought they saw a glimpse some kind of rare animal, so they are trying to find it again.


Ryan: ok. Maybe it’s (moving some leaves aside) here!


*a brown squirrel pops out of the leaves and onto Ryan’s face. Ryan flips out and runs around like a maniac trying to get it off. He ends up tripping over a stump, causing the squirrel to let go of his head.


Sarah: (laughing) well this might not be what you want to hear exactly, but that was really funny.

Ryan: I was so freaked out Sarah. Not funny…ok now that i think about it, maybe it was a little funny.

Sarah:(laughing) well I don’t think we’re going to find that odd looking animal again. Let’s go back.


*Ryan and Sarah head back to Sarah’s house. When they step out of the woods they notice a man standing in front of them. Raziel appears.


Raziel: Ryan, That’s Zach.

Ryan: (disappointed) oh great what does he want.

Dark Zach: I can see your friend there Ryan. Raziel thinks that I am Zach. (laughs) well you can think all you want. Let’s just say Zach is a wonderful host. All that anger he has toward you is just what I like in a host.

Ryan: what on earth are you talking about Zach...and why do you sound so funny?


*Ryan, Raziel, and Sarah are all confused. A few moments later, Ryan senses the presence of something extremely evil. He starts to shake.


Dark Zach: aww what’s wrong, do I have you spooked out Ryan? If you still don’t know what’s going on here then let me demonstrate something to you.


*a blackish-purple aura appears around Zach. It is at this moment that Ryan knows exactly what’s going on here. Ryan’s Rising White Aura appears around him, and the Brown in Ryan’s eyes turn white. The force controlling Zach is satisfied with what he sees.


Dark Zach: ah so I see you have awakened the Rising within you. But tell me something. Can you control it’s magic?


*the darkness controlling Zach causing him to hold out his right arm as a blackish-purple wave emanates from it. Ryan I stunned at the power this darkness has. He notices this blast is heading right toward Sarah. Ryan jumps in front of her, and holds out his right arm. The blast from Zach stops and fades away once it hits Ryan’s hand.


Sarah: thank you.

Raziel: how did you know to do that?

Ryan: actually, I didn’t. but it was common sense that I had to save Sarah. Plus I feel like the Rising inside me is telling me what to do.

Dark Zach: so you do know some tricks. Well this should be fun. You know what happens now Ryan?

Ryan: yea. you let go of Zach. Set him free right now!

Dark Zach: aww but I’m having so much fun! How about we do this like it’s supposed to be done.

Ryan: so, you mean a duel…

Dark Zach: that’s right. and this time Ryan, things are going to be much different for you’re friend Zach here. For instance, let’s talk about the results of our duel. if you win, and I wouldn’t count on it, Zach is free to go and he wont remember anything that has happened since I took over. But if I win, Zach remains my prisoner. And as for you, lets just say your life will be cut short. And with you out of the way, my power can strive off of every person in the world. Once that happens, my master, known as the dark ruler, will be free to walk the earth and create a new world, and he will give us life beyond imprisoning you humans.

Ryan: so if I lose this battle, you’re going to wipe out every human in the whole world? Sorry but I cant let you do that. And if the only way to prevent that is with a duel, then so be it. time to throw down Zach!


*the white aura around Ryan waves rapidly, seeming like it grows with his pride. Ryan whips out his duel disk and places his deck inside as it is shuffled. Raziel Disappears. Dark Zach’s arm glows black, forming a duel disk with a deck already inside. Sarah notices a drop of sweat stream down his cheek. She can tell he’s nervous, even though he won’t show it.


Sarah: Ryan! We’re all here for you!


*Ryan and Zach draw their opening hands as their Life Points are set to 4000. Honest appears.


Honest: good luck Ryan.

Ryan: thanks guys. I’ll do everything I can to keep us safe. I promise.

Dark Zach: big words coming from someone who has no idea what he’s about to encounter.

Ryan: then let’s stop talking and start dueling. Ready Zach!? I’m not holding back. I’m going to do everything in my power to stop you. You can count on that!

Dark Zach: fine fine. Do what you want. Time to duel.


Dark Zach & Ryan: Let’s do this!



To be continued…